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I have low standards, so everything is alright in my book. I just have two gripes:1) the MC does a lot of internal monologuing, and I mean, too much that the author might as well use an omniscient narrator. Here is an abridged example: MC says X Character-A says Y, MC will physically react & reply to Character-A, and then in their head, they will have 1 paragraph worth of monologuing. Oftentimes, the MC is in precarious situations, so they mostly complain and are very judgmental.2) The original Kotone Kisaragi was a tr*sh character. This puts the MC in a disadvantage where they HAVE to be passive, or else she will earn the ire of High Society. That is fair and all, but the MC is a good target for teasing by other characters, especially any kids who are from the 12 Families. This is a breech of the MC's self-imposed rules, and hampers with her journey to recover her reputation. She ought to speak up about her struggles, rather than be an object of constant teasing tl;dr very annoying