Top-notch Masquerading as Cannon Fodder Female Companion Chapter 386 Discussion

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This needs a better title

"Little Snow Lotus vs The Green Tea B!tches"

"Earth Girls Aren't Fuel Efficient Lamps"

But aside from that it's a good read. I figured I'd read 10 chapter see how it was, now I've binged nearly 400 chapters in and still going it's been that much fun.

This isn't to say the novel doesn't have problems. It has some pretty big ones, the biggest that it's too long. The childhood arc is easily the best. Tan Mo is just adorable and her brothers are incredible. It's just heart warming to watch them form up to protect their sister. Even the antagonists are fun and the Mary Sue power hasn't gone into overdrive. As she gets older well it gets worse with new abilities emerging antagonists going suicidal and in general going from unique to more generic.

The other big problem is the writing. Man this author needs an editor, badly!!! Name problems, phrasing issue even how he organizes all jumbled. It truly detracts from what should be a fun novel.

On Balance, it;s still worth the read.
 
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