Became the Final Boss in a Magical Girl Game Chapter 11 Discussion

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It's a good read, albeit with weird and confusing moments in the story, which is made worse by the below average translation from the translator (they expect to be paid for this shit?!?!). The gender of some people keep on switching, the sentences don't flow well, and the overall atmosphere feel robotic. Fortunately, I can fix the mistakes in my mind but it's seriously annoying to do for every chapter.

Anyway, I like the way the MC is going with trying to get the girls, using the resources at his disposal in a decently logical way, and the first girl isn't too boring or cardboardy, but there are moments I find her a bit bland. Can't say much for the other girls. Overall, a good read that is dragged down by the translator (again, you expect to be paid for this?).
 
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