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I'm being nice giving it a 3 because it's a naively written story. However, I can see how one would ignore that for the fluffy romance.The MC's personality is incomprehensible to me. I have no idea how old she is, how smart she is, or anything. Arguably she comes off very clueless and dumb (the ML said it first) despite her occasional reasonable actions.It's like hitting points by passing the ball through the hoop or into a goal, but you never saw them kick the ball or throw it. Aka I don't understand how she got there with her personality. That's her actions versus her mostly naive personality. you're telling me the person who used blankets to sneak out from a window in her OWN HOME (wha...) is also thinking long term for vampires. Not to mention, why does the ML like her?Answer: because it seems like slightly dumb cute girls with a heart of gold is like hook line and sinker for mls. I think it can still be cute but don't expect too much in terms of it's writing imo.
