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This cute story is between a 3 and a 4 for me - has potential to be better. There wasn't enough character development/explanation. Then again, it sounds like this is a spinoff from another story, so that might be why it's so short?Would be nice to see the story from Sean's POV. I think his inner thoughts would be hilarious, lol. There wasn't enough explanation about the antagonists either - the mystery was actually kind of interesting but then it just flopped at the reveal.