- #1
Is this story written well?It's alright, the translation is okay too.The only reason I'm not rating this too high, it's because this story is damn frustrating.I'm seeing many tropes that have been used and recycled at this point.And it's written so well that I feel like choking myself too.On of those situation that I just feel like writing a fanfic myself to mu*der half of those characters and grab the protagonist by the shoulders and shake her real hard.It's sad. It's damn suffocating. I'm having second hand depression. I'm dropping this. I already have a few guesses about where the story is heading. But I rather see that word burn. Give the fire attribute to that FL, let her rage, not the ML.