- #1
The foundation is good and the premise of the story is interesting BUT it's too confusing as the pacing is too fast that I don't know what's happening anymore and it's hard to continue reading, as there are empty informations that just pops out. The author didn't even states that its already fast forwarded and even skipped a lot of informations and world building. But I'm not really sure if it is the author or the translator missed some things so I'll just check the raws to make sure.
