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I'm going to put this on hold. The stories are nice and fluffy, but I feel like the MC character is inconsistent. He's supposed to be a powerful spiritual beast who was too timid to accept the feelings of his best friend, but then he immediately turns into a s*x seeking tease once he is in charge of rescuing the friend. No gradual development, no slow realization.This means the fluff starts soon, but in qt stories, I honestly think the arcs where the mc/ML are just chasing love are the most boring arcs, and unfortunately in this novel, those arcs start soon.The worst part of this is that, while the arcs have decent amount of plot and face slapping, the amount of exposition is even more. I don't want the author to tell me random facts like the MC opened his mouth in surprise. Sometimes it felt like I was reading a movie script where the writer was trying very hard to make sure the actors in our imagination got the emotion down just right. But this is a novel, not a script. Please just tell the story, I promise my brain can come up with a reasonable interpretation of the character's emotions based on their actions and the scenario.