Family Cultivation: Ascending to Immortality Chapter 216 Discussion

When I started read this novel, I really liked the original concept. This would be an original work when the focous would be the MC + his family, not just him like others wuxia stories. I liked that so much I signed the TL patreon to read the advanced chapters. But, unfortunatly, since the chapter 80 (something next to it), the writter has lost in his own story and transformed this in another generic tale we have already seen before. And honestly, I think to put almost 150 chapters as advanced isn't the better way to offer your work in this competitive enviorament. Scored that, lets go:

Characters: 1.5/5

The only character I really liked was MC's grandfather. Stong, wise and carefull with his family and clan. When the MC tells to him about his opportunities, he doesn't trie to explore his grandchield, but he tries to protect him giving good advices and offering support to him. It isn't something forced, you really believe he is a good guy, a result from a good clan which knows the importance to treat well his members and don't allow individual interests break the house. The MC is medyocre. He is slight better than ordinary wuxia MCs, but at the end, the bacame one like them. One thing that get me out his story is how the writter sometimes forget about MC personality. Spoiler

At one moment, he likes to keep his word, but another "Nhá, I will kill him anyway".

[collapse] The other characters are forgettable.

Character's development: 0.5/5

Only his junior sister has some development, from being a naive person to a wary one, but is so bad executed that you don't feel anything about her change. Well, it's not a big loss, she hasn't been an interesting character since the start anyway.

World building: 0/5

We don't know almost nothing about this world, even after 200 chapters. Just the ordinary blá-blá-blá we all know. Nothing.

Fighters: 0.5/5

The combination with his spirit animals and his mu*der style is interesting. You really feel the importance of his animals, but is just that. I read dozens of fighters and out his firsts fighters, nothing is really impressive and entertaining.

Story: 1/5

Its really nice to see him and his family together at start, but how this story has become a "solo level adventure story"...

Futhermore, God, this MC is more lucky than Yun Chen or another Wuxia character I remember. I am not kidding, in the first 100 chapters, he meet an opportunity after another. After the first 100, he has got one each 5 chapters. Damn, at one point, I catch myself saying "OH, no, another f*cking one??? God, when he will come back to his home?"

Serioslly, I really liked this story at its start, but now is just a generic wuxia.