Let’s Manage the Tower Chapter 1357 Discussion

If you came from the manga then you will be disappointment, the novel itself is very PG 13 and has a different feel compared to the manga, the romance is very dry and lacks creativity, and the harem is lazy and forced

For the main story it is fine but the author loses track of what is important and just makes endless side stories with little meaning to them. Good premise but horrible execution.

The translation is way behind (less than half the WN is translated) and honestly speaking the translation is improved and corrected MTL so if you are in a hurry just go with google translate or deepl. Below will be spoilers so be warned.

The main story:

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The main story starts off well and fun but quickly gets overloaded with characters that the main characters become side characters (Mitsuki and kouhi being guardogs/ servants) and the author is heavily biased towards the human members like floria and to a lesser degree the later members of the harem and giving them power/ important roles at every turn possible to make them rival the others which is not fun. The arrogant harem member who joined last shouldn't be equal to the more loyal harem members who were with him from the start. The entire tower was spoon fed to him by the two emissaries yet they are mostly used as the scary dogs who are taken for granted.

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Second half of the story:

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The bigger problem in this part is the MC losing power as he gains power. What I mean because he became a god the author writes in a weird way. Like why can't the person with a wifu that can teleport, with the power of gates, make a room where he can safely interact with his children without outsiders giving bad influence? But nah lets pretend he is a a useless dad who has to wait for the mom to bring the child to him to the management floor because god forbid he meets the offspring of the queen because he is a god and stuff. It just screams lazy writing As the side story progress the MC becomes more and more of a side character in a bad way. To me the second half where side story became the main thing is a waste of time, but to each their own.

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