Undying Patient Chapter 1 part1 Discussion

Well, I'm currently mtl-Ing it and decided to finally write a review.

So let's start with the characters...

mc: a confused human with practically zero memories of his life.

ml: An alien, apparently.

system one: an ultra dick

system zero: a dick- but hidden behind a cutesy baby personality.

So, their personalities are generally lovely - except for system one. Character arcs are quite interesting to go through - except for system ones. In fact, just fuuuuck system one.

Villains: Occasionally there will be very compelling storylines, and then suddenly -

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theres a crazy female who can't seem to ever take no for an answer and is there solely to make our cp jealous. Pretty much, a lot of the villains are freakishly deluded.

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plot: uhm, not sure... at some point I thought Spoiler

there would be a reason system one acts like such a huge d*ck to our MC. But based on where I am now in the storyline...

err, not really. apparently the MC broke up with their master for literally ml's own sake, lost his memory of ML and was understandable terrified when an unknown alien suddenly tried to come up to him. Even worse when it's only after meeting that alien that he gets fatally sick and dies (sort of).

I don't know what MC has to feel guilty about aside from lying to the ml. But from the way they talk about it seems like everyone knows MC did it to protect the ml, so WHY does system one LITERALLY torture MC in the beginning of the novel????

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okay, aside from that, there will be a few inconsistencies, like Spoiler

The punishments system one is supposed to fish out. Those kind of tapered off in later chapters and instead turned into the shitty mind game where system one is like "if u fall for him, ur gonna die/I'm gonna punish your" but is also like "do what you want/you love him/why don't you love him bro??" The flip flopping? It gets annoying, quick, but that's pretty much the rest of the story. MC desperately trying to love the ml, but system one punishing him constantly even though that's apparently EXACTLY what they all wanted him to do.

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im confusion ?

the arcs are all super fun and unique, though. Definitely worth the read.