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At some point the story goes from being:incessant smut punctuated by a pretty good medieval fantasy story with decent world building and political intrigue, to:a pretty good medieval fantasy story with decent world building and political intrigue occasionally punctuated by smut.It's probably a shame that the beginning will scare off people that would enjoy what it becomes, and what it becomes is probably going to annoy the people that signed up for the vapid smut it began as.