My Author is Forcing Me to Date Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter Raggnarss0n
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3 Stars because I saw the potential.

Short Stories (8-12 Chapter per Story)

Overall Review

The stories has potential, but it feels rushed maybe because it's too short. There's not enough detail in the plot or character development. It's like a basic outline, leaving readers to imagine the rest. There's also not much dialogue, which makes it harder to connect with the characters. Adding more detail to the story and characters would make it more enjoyable to read.
 
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