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The story is fun. I love world building but the author really rush the plots and such.The pacing can be tolerable but I think he/she cannot handle characters juggling at all. Multiple POV can help with this but unfortunately this author is kinda bent on rushing on with the plot. Examples of rushing: Spoiler
The quick plot about marriage or the shitty politic between the king. The king seriously just wrote him some fancy letter without a knowing him well enough. The girl who instantly fell for him. Author never really build up that relationship just hand waved it implying through the course of handwavey meetings she fell for him.
[collapse]The plot while fun is ok and the world building is also ok. It's not that great the unique down side to magic in this world is pretty fun at the same time is used so that the MC can use his previous world knowledge to supplement it.Overall I rate it 3 stars.