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The issue that I have with the majority of these fantasy/ European Ambience web novels is the lack of proper description when building a scene. There are so many good ones like this that I've had to drop because of a jump in scene from her being in a class and learning, to the next line suddenly jumping to her being in the toilet. No smooth transition that you would ordinary get in a traditional story. They all feel like they a written and translated as scripts with the bare minimum detail of what the character is doing in that moment. With that said it's a shame that I can't get into these novels - especially this one because of that.