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This is a unique story with true female protagonists, set in a world where women are heavily discriminated. The plot is intriguing but the beginning is unimpressive and dawdles too much. It is only after 20 chapters that the story come to live and becomes much more interesting; which is such a pity because many readers might have lost interest before the main arc even begin.Spoiler
After 100 iterations, MC finally forsakes everything and jumps in front of the running train, which unexpectedly opens a new path. She run away from her family, embarks on an adventure, meet new people and makes friends. She shows remarkable courage and strength to not give up even in the hopeless situation and manages to create miracle, but it's not all roses. There are moments of laughter and happiness, but also tears and despair, which makes the story alive.
[collapse]The writing is decent, good enough to get 4+ star. Some parts are brilliantly written and some are just average. There are elements from earlier chapters which seems to be forgotten as the story progress, and there are times when the crucial questions are not answered immediately, but only after 30-40 chapters later, as if the author forgot to address it and only remember it late. The naming of the characters is also another concerning issue. Author should be more creative in fleshing out fresh names, instead of mixing names from mythologies, religions and history without proper basis and understanding, thus creating confusions.TL;DR: It's really a good story with a novel idea, but it's late bloomer. You need to read pass chapter 20 to get to the fun part. Unfortunately, the current translation is dropped just before it reaches that part. Hopefully another translator can pick this up.