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Well at early stages MC really is kind of stingy and sometimes really dumb. What I kinda hate now is how the side characters are very arrogant and pushover especially the bear cub and the cat merchant.Additionally, some scenes are repetitive and tiring, sometimes I skim at these parts since it's really not that worth to read.There are also characters served as cannon fodders to MC and his minions. Enslaving them after the fight. At this point I really hate how these cat at bear are arrogant and demanding like a bully. Enslaving every creatures bothered them. Also these cannon fodders all have the same pattern. You mess with MC and his minion, be a loser to a fight then be a s*ave. Well at later chapters the main plot now had been progressing steadily. So it's kinda a good read if only you are patient to these repetitive scenes. Also there are times you may find lacking as some plot points haven't executed well as he progresses the plot. For example;Spoiler
When he returned the night at the black tower. These part seems like lacking in reactions. We don't see the human hunters, monsters, and the native reactions and to this new day and night cycle to the tower.
[collapse]SpoilerContract is absolute. But its disappointing that you can enter contract with the other party being unconscious and without their agreement. Contract and enslaving are their main weapon at this point.
[collapse]SpoilerIf he really want to import things from outside the tower, he should trade with hunters. By this, the golden bat will lose its use
[collapse]Lastly, the translator had a very good job translating the novel.