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I have no idea if it's the translation or if the source is this bad, but I feel like I'm having a stroke while reading.Not only does it change POV and tenses mid-sentence, some parts are simply complete nonsense from the first chapter onwards. "If" is used for "when", "who" instead of "whom", "tries" for "tried" - you get the idea.Sometimes whole sentences don't make any sense whatsoever.The whole structure seems like an elementary school assignment. "... said character X", "... did character X", and in case the writer didn't specify it in this childish manner, you have no idea who the speaker/actor is.This is typical for KH novels so I won't blame the translator for this one, it's very likely how it was in the original.I honestly have no idea if the story is good or not because I'm busy trying to comprehend what I just read.People who failed elementary school language classes shouldn't be writers, the Korean webnovel market still needs to learn that.