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The story is a homeless man's "I was kicked out of the party." The dialogue is basic. The characters are one-dimensional and just plain dumb. Seriously. The antagonists are written as plain old dumb jerks one would find in a junior novel.No threat at all.No, really there are no higher ambitions, so far all the characters are who we see them as. No one has higher aspirations, or internal conflicts. There's nothing in their past we can gleam with subtext because it's woefully lacking.The translations has problems here and there every chapter but it's never enough to take one out of immersion.We have an MC who doesn't stick up for himself and is somewhat dense regarding the poor behaviour of his former colleagues.
