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Average smut novel. The plot in itself is good but the author gets lost in his story... To sum it up the MC is weak and got sent back to the past by luck.So now we follow his journey to the top... It would've been a good premise if the base of this novel wasn't smut... But since it's all p*rn the author has to juggle between s*x scenes, the harem, the dynamic of the characters,... + All the things related to powering his MC, make it all make sense etc...Normally that's why most of smut novels have an overpowered MC to not complicate their writing, but here the author engages in an not so easy path... And he doesn't do it well...At the start, the smut is cringe (maybe justified? Borderline r*pey) then it becomes ok but somewhat bland and repetitive...The "action" and the whole "power-leveling" is average too since the author loses brain capacity? thinking about the mid smut he writes...Anyway it's a 3/5 for me, it's only 40 chapters long right now, read it if you have a few hours to kill