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The novel is fine, it has some annoying parts and good parts. Nevertheless, it’s pretty nice for a past-time read.First the bad parts- MC’s naivety irks me quite often but I digress because he was a s*ave for 5 years. 5 years of being succumb to that label and work will do quite a bit on someone’s mindset. But do I care, no (I do a bit), a MCs underestimating themselves is still annoying no matter what situation.-Second, the dialouge between our character feels really bland. Like they all have thee generic surprised reaction when MC does something and the way our leads talk to each other feels like how I’d would write it if I wrote a story with talking like this. So I guess the writing feels amateurish.For example (not from the story) :Character 1: “I took 5 years to master this move and you have the talent to learn it in 3, if you train hard enough.”*MC does it perfectly first try*Character 1: “WHATTTT!?!?!?!?!? You did firsstttttt try?!?!!? That’s impossiblllllleeeee. How did you do it.”MC: (Thinking that he did bad) “I-I I just swinged my sword. Did I mess it up?”Side Character 1: “He did something that even character 1 only did in 5 years, in one try. I must get him on my side!”That’s basically what some of the chapters look like. Now for the good parts:MC and FL meet really early and there isn’t any bs misunderstanding and irritating nuisances like that and no harem (for now at least). Anddddd that’s basically it for the good parts.Overall it’s passable and... nothing much to add.