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this jumped the shark ten words in and then proceeded to do the sickest possible ollies and flips, winding up triumphantly in the best possible tradition of Harlequin Romances with justice served out with a lavish hand in the form of a deus ex machina villain that has no coherent motive as far as I can tell besides the author needing an idiot to be obsessed with the ML to drive the plot forward.perfect execution, no notes.translation was pretty obviously unedited MTL by the way the pronouns switched around (MC gets "she" a lot) but still readable.