- #1
ok so this is cute, grammar and english is fine, very little instance of mixing up he and she pronouns. C1-C35, really good. Characters have good chemistry and nothing is cringey. BUT it's not going anywhere, too much fluffy or filler stories that didn't lead to strong character change/development. C46 and I still don't know where the story is heading towards and there's just not enough character dev to justify all the slice-of-life events. Slice of life only works well if they have meaning but it just feels the characters are going through a robotic motion of a set formula for wiring BL. C1-C35, 5/5. Beyond that, it just feels the same old same old.
