I Noticed That I’ve Become A BL Game Protagonist’s Younger Brother! Chapter 3 Discussion

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There are only three chapters so far, so I can't say much, but it's promising!

What I respect is that the first love interest we see, Kaede, actually got rejected by the big brother first before starting to fall for the little brother, our MC. It's a change from what we usually see, where the ML immediately falls for the MC without any previous serious love interests.

The only negative is that the second translator, Foxaholic, tends to forget to add punctuation to dialogue, which hurts my inner perfectionist. For me to give this 5 stars, the translator would need to get a beta-reader.
 
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