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mehauthor is not bad at writing various kind of characters and he does it frequently, there is probably close to 40 characters written already in ch 21, but the problem is there are too much extras in the story that are being used for everything that we dont have anything meaningful aside from mc's development.novel itself is not bad (aside from: author sucking at writing conversations, it feels like a puzzle to figure out whotf is talking) (and author changing perspectives tooo much for us to understand anything sometimes) writing is not bad and characters are likeable, chemistry is faint but there, worldbuilding is slow but steadybut the problem is that it doesnt have anything special about it and it isnt interesting at all. Lack of tension is bit too much cuz of the setup and mc's character doesnt help this at all either, making this more like a long biography rather then a storyI would consider reading it if updates were too much frequent and I could skip the filler parts freely but neither chapters in stockpile being 22 nor the 1/3 chapter publishing helps