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It's quite badly written, in many ways. Third-rate villains act utterly insane but receive authority and get away with mu*der. Frequently third and first person perspective is switched.Combat Jobs require an apprenticeship that may take years or just a few days because not much is actually learnt and there are no standards. Anyone who'd make it would be skilled enough to skip a few ranks.The protagonist is plain, simply optimistic and a fast/astute learner. A basic outstanding power and basic fantasy wouldn't be so bad but it's badly written. It'd require the protagonist and characters to carry the work but here they are too simple, there isn't much in the way of comedy or romance.
