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its good, so good. but i, as a reader who nvr read smut (yes, ik weird, but I feel uncomfortable sometimes) was quite shocked when we got to the part where Spoiler
ML m*sturbated to fl
[collapse] but at that point, I was already way too into it so I couldnt pull back BUT YEAH GUYS TO ALL U FREAKS OUT THERE YIPPEE ITS SMUT YEAH n I ACTUALLY took it upon myself to add the tags </3an actual review:the story is good, I like the fl, shes very firm with whatever shes doing but shes still a girl so sometimes she let tess off w whatever he was gonna do to her (bcs of her feelings im not misogynistic pls dont misunderstand me). I however dont like the blatant favoritism her parents r doing w fls sister but ig it was natural (youll know) I like the ml, kinda..... idk but hes not as annoying as he was in the earlier chs, but ig he stayed true to his possessiveness (A TAG WHICH I ALSO JUST ADDED HELLO???) n every characters r so far consistent, I like it. they r also like real ppl, not j simple ppl on paper yk?? so yeah give it a go! the story does hook u in but u may lose interest in some parts. kudos to the tl for bringing forth a smooch tl I love u