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I gotta say the story is amazing. But the author needs to do some more research on the actual gameplay cuz as a real player I feel a lot of things are missing.1. Like when MC dont even bother to kill a tank cuz its a tank. Well its true, usually Players should prioritize killing squishy, high dmg output champion first. Cuz killing a tank will take a lot of time. But the author forgets that on early game thats an exception. On early game tank didn't have any items. It will be easier to kill them early on than later, and it will also make you distrupt enemies gold earning and levels. So if you have the chance you should just also kill the tank early game.2. This is specifically on the chapter 69. On pro player level, killing enemies without moving out of the tower is simply very unrealistic and impossible. Idk what the author was thingking when writing this. But writing that just to make the MC seems op is well uhhh uncalled for. Like even I feel very uneasy abt it. Like how?, think abt it when you were being attacked there's no way you're just staying still right? You ran. Then when you ran, the enemies will also run towards you to keep you inside of their target rage so they can kill you. There's no way. There's just no way, Killing inside a tower. Especially if that is an early game with enemies blood on 80%.3. The author should probably introduce us more of tower diving. Its a term for those who dont know for killing enemies inside of their tower. When we "dive" to the enemy tower, we will take some DMG once in a while, so it is extremely risky to do this as a squishy hero. But there's thing idk what its called in english, when other teammates took the tower dmg for you. Cuz the tower could only DMG a person once at a time. This is also the main use of minions. To take the tower damage for you. The author did mention this a little bit in game.4. The thing that I found weird also, is that there's zero mentions of the need of vision when playing. The author briefly mentioned this when MC was going 1v1 with the other midlaner newbie from the team. Author's explanation was right don't get me wrong But vision plays a very very big role on game and not just for 1v1, there's a lot of factors on 5v5, each lane going 1v1 is almost not guaranteed. You need vision to start an ambush, you need a vision to stay out of being ambushed, you need a vision to start taking the dragon/lord/master/buff so the enemy cannot steal it, you need a vision to start farming, and you need a vision to keep the map open, so you can move freely and confident. But the author just didn't mention this when on real pro players are willing to die to get a vision on a single little bush cuz that single little bush can effect the entire gameplay. But I'll just suspect the author doesn't know abt it so yeah well its fine.5. And since this is a pro player level plays, I was expecting more micro skills to be mentioned or at least introduce, but I guess the author don't really know a lot abt it.Tbh theres a lot more things going on, on the game play that as a player I found weird. But I only play a few moba games myself like aov, lol, mlbb. But that was a long time ago and I didn't quite make it till the upper class so I don't exactly know abt the details since every game has different mechanics. Now I only play mlbb actively cuz the game is very popular where I live. Then if I truly match the game here with mlbb there'll be lots of things I wanna point out, I'll make this book seems very bad when its actually very good.So, if you are also a player like me, then just ignore the minor details, the story itself is very good and its not like the gameplay is super duper bad that you can't read it, its quite nice but, I just need to point this out.But if you are not a player, then lucky you, you can enjoy this book without too analyzing the battle like I did XDSo is it a good read? Yes 10/10, but the game play itself? 6-7/10Well I am assuming the author is saving the more detailed stuff later on when they actually face off or on big battles. So this can be toleratedBut if you are looking for a truly detailed micro gameplay stoey, then nope this is not the right novel to look at. I mean look at the genre its bl/abo/games it is abt game. And mostly abt game but the real catch here that it is bl so yeah. Have a good read!