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The novel seems promising to me for now. Although it can be seen that it has a lighter tone compared to other e-sport novels like the 'E-sports toxic assembly camp' or 'I can do it, ' it doesn't diminish interest.So far so good, the only issue I found was that the author was too hasty to delve into the world of e-sports that it seemed as if they just brushed over MCs transmigration simply as something nontrivial. It seems too hasty and leaves the impression that he didn't really need to realize that he just died and transmigrated. His feelings for his acquaintances and so in his previous life seems too detached and it seems as if he doesn't even really care. Furthermore, it appears he even cares more about his experiences of esports rather than his sentiments to the ones he left behind. Just one paragraph and bwalah, move on.
