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because I despised how they got together. All of that build up with YSY thinking about how he'd apologize to CS and tell him he wanted to be buddies thrown out for a tr*shy susceptible alpha period plot point where CS 'loses control' and kisses him so YSY thinks 'why not be boyfriends since I wasn't disgusted'. I don't care that YSY was having ambiguous feelings before that, I care about the misunderstandings that just went completely CS's way and got him a boyfriend like that. I read this because I saw reviews saying it wasn't one of those bad ABO stories and that the partners truly respected each other and would've gotten together regardless of their genders and then the author threw that typical alpha loses control and omega is fine with it plot point together just to get YSY and CS together!!!!!!
[collapse]Other than that, the story was entertaining, and I enjoyed the easy to understand gaming terminology and how detailed the author could get with the matches and strategies and such. I did find it a little convenient how much they won especially with CFX being a newbie marksman, but I guess it is to be expected in esports novels.