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3/5 for the story, 3/5 for the entertainment.I'm dropping it at Chapter 62. The plot holes are simply too much for me to continue reading the remaining 38 chapters. For me, I can forgive plot holes as long as they're not distracting. For example, I don't mind braindead cannonfodders because it's a Mary Sue novel and power fantasy is what I'm reading the book for. What irks me is when the MC or ML is s*upid.For example, the MC continuously does nonsensical things like allowing people hostile to him to remain in their house and even believing those hostile people. Is he blind? It's very obvious the author turned off his braincells so the plot could move forward. For example, one of the other adopted children drugs MC with an aphrodisiac in the early chapters. MC knows he did this deliberately. Still, MC did nothing. Even when that other adopted child continuously threatened him and MC knew the ML would take his side, the MC still did nothing against that other adopted child. Is he s*upid? He had already died because of a hostile person in his last life. Even if the other adopted child had no real power, did the MC not consider he could still harm him?And when that other adopted child told the MC the ML had a white moonlight, MC believed him! He checked the ML's yearbook and when he saw one of the ML's classmates that used to like the ML, MC immediately concluded, "ah! So the ML does have a white moonlight! And it's this guy!" Like what? Where is your brain, MC?Also, even if we say that the MC is not a hostile person, he is still always on the defensive. In the early chapters he vowed to take revenge on ML's adopted son, who killed him in his previous life. MC even studied Economics in college instead of going to an art school because of this. Yet, he never does anything against the ML's adopted son. All faceslapping done to that son was done by the ML himself. The MC never does anything on his own.And that's it for my rant. If dumb MCs are your thing, you'll love this.