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I gotta be honest... I like the story but I really hate how it's told, like the whole damn novel is 95% monologue and 5% actual story. The monologue aren't even helpful, provide insight or tells us something new since it just repeating the same damn thing over and over and over and over and over with different words pretty sure if they removed the useless monologue this novel would have about 12 chapter per volume. Like this gives the same vibes of rent a girlfriend, each chapter keeps going in circles. I like the story but the author is milking this way to hard like rent a girlfriend. There have been chapters where its just the MC (mob) doing a monologue for the whole chapters and maybe says one word to other characters. I don't think I can handle another 300 chapters of monologues but I am already too deep into this sht. I even haven't touched the issues with the characters so I am just going to say ALL the characters can be best describe as..... FETISH FULFILLMENT.