Breakthrough with the Forbidden Master Chapter 95 Discussion

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It's your typical clich jap novel. The story definitely starts out well with plenty of exposition towards its current setting and back story towards its characters. The fighting is front and center while romance is mostly on the back burner. Honestly it's a decent read up to a certain point as the author does ok with character development. But for me I felt unmotivated to read anymore of this novel as it feels like the author is just intentionally pushing the MC down. He gets stronger and wins a fight. But suddenly oh there's this new character that is 10x stronger than you, but don't worry the master will make you stronger in a short period of time. Oh did I forget to mention that MC will just always barely be able to win cuz of his "heart", "willpower", or omega denseness. It feels like DragonBall z but goku is a beta instead of an alpha Chad or better put why did you place this guy as a rival if there's a new rival out of nowhere that's 10x better. Not to mention the author is always putting the MC down. It's not even humbling it's literally just oh you got good score? Well this bit*h is better than you, ha you loser. Also he only grows up in terms of heart and fighting, not really much else in any other department. He doesn't get better at reading people, smarter, or is always listening to other people instead of thinking for himself outside a fight. Those are just my gripes.
 
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