Breakthrough with the Forbidden Master Chapter 59 Discussion

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It's nice story. There are small issues but I think it's worth trying

MC really feels like teenage and he really leaves IN the world. I mean there is not that much plot armor for now, there are lucky coincidences but not on the level of gods blessings, awakenings and random skill which MC will need in next chapter.

Amount of monologues is annoying but bearable. Fists against sword is s*upid but still acceptable.
 
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