- #1
The story really ran out of steam & isn't going anywhere.... It started out decently but made the main character too OP too quickly, killing any hopes of a decent story. Once the friend enters the picture, there isn't even a decent slice of life story since it tries too hard to be more "MMO-esque" but fails.At some point I started wondering whether the author was including the chat-room commentary & skill/equipment descriptions just to pad out the word count.