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Drags on a bit later on until it sort of lost me after the events after the selection for the Fourth Hokage in the sense that everything after that point sort of feels aimless and every moment of the story that feels like it should be just one chapter has been cut into eight or ten. I feel like every likeable character likes the main character and every unlikable character is befuddled by the protagonist's actions, sort of like an otome themed story or a Disney princess story, where all the guys are in their own little worlds. There's quiet some plot holes everywhere, from how, despite everyone else could be tracked, the clones of the protagonist are always hidden despite it just being the Forest of Death, to the little things that sort of feel like pointless filler.However, on a whole, it's still better than 98% of the other content that try to do something like this so it's not that bad in all. You'll feel like the protagonist is somewhat unlikable from a reader's perspective, and his motivations are sort of strange, but in all it's a self-indulgent story.