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Pretty awesome fanfic. Early chapters are super fun as the author knows Naruto lore very well.Even the relatively mundane Hinata kidnapping event that was just briefly mentioned in the original story has a political intrigue and important plot significances further down the line. The hidden politics actually makes this story one of the best since through most of the story, MC is definitely not the strongest.The only bad thing was that some of side characters are kinda written off near the end of the story.Spoiler
Nagato kinda dies as a no-name character after he gets taken over by an Otsutsuki. Konan is let hanging with no resolution for her character.
Kurama dies and gets absorbed into the 10 tail and nothing happens after that. He is just forgotten about.
Naruto and Sasuke becomes side characters since the power level at the end of the story becomes too high even for them
Even the "super bad guys" Otsutsuki invaders, all get destroyed pretty much instantly near the end.
The story pretty cements MC as unbeatable god near the end.
[collapse]Awesome story, some of the fanfic plot points are so well written that they will definitely become head cannon for anyone that rewatch original Naruto and notice the plot holes.