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I give up with the novel... Is good at beginning... But at some point I begun doubt the story point itself.The beginning story is fun when because there element of surprise about the female lead is unique... However what I feel absurd is the male lead progress...Let's say the male lead is someone who have a trusts issue and cold person... Who not trusts anyone even they supposed to be college in work. However somehow I don't feel this situation called trus issue itself... Is just like someone who easier get mad and actually a soft person who easy accept people when he close at some point. So my point is where is the trust issue... Where is thing called he hate everyone... Is just become a narration without real basis in the story... And the flow of love between female lead and male lead is absurd because is too fast. The trusts issue between male lead not yet solved but they already sweet like candy.... And story go on on on about supernatural being...The female itself is pretty funny absurd you can left your pet, your doll, your servant ghost servant in other home... And go on on on... With male lead forget her responsibilities to take care of them until her doll get trouble.... So I can say... Is her faulty...So all problem that happen in the story because they absurdity to not make it done when actually is still small problem and the problem become bigger...The flow become absurd because I can foresee the problem with their personality and their flow storyline is like forced... And issue that need to be solved someone just let it be... And the story go to destination that feel like it's okay.... But not okay at all...