The Aftermath of Having Slept with the Villain Chapter 19 Discussion

It's okay, I just think the author doesn't like to put detail into their writing, so it makes the story very floaty.

At times, I don't know what is happening because transitions are nonexistent, and events that should be written out are glossed over. For example, the main character participates in a variety show, and that's shown in the end of a chapter. And then the start of the next chapter, the variety show is coming to an end.

And this happens consistently, where things are said to be happening, and then it is immediately over. Another instance of this was when she and the ML decide to have s*x, and in the next scene, they're in a relationship, with nothing establishing that. Then immediately, they skip to when she, who was an 18th tier actress, is beloved by her fans. The story is everywhere and nowhere at once.