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Well. I do like it. And I’ll be honest this far in I don’t see the harem yet. There’s 1 paragraph of a possible “heart throb”. The MC contradicts himself often. In the same chapter quite a few times he’ll deny something then turn around before the end it’ll turn the statement 180. Claiming to be weak but knowing he’s strong. It almost feels like he gained a multiple personality disorder which you can’t know if it’s from the time he spent in the game or the author is really just confusing us. Or the person translating. Idk. He loves calling everyone small fries. Prepare. Sometimes the plot seems rushed and to spread out. Half a volume ago a charter was ?kinda? Added to play in the main cast but we really didn’t get an introduction only she will def. Be added. Often characters are tossed away into the void you wonder when you’ll see them again. Several times out of nowhere some continent “plot” comes out or some that honestly just kinda doesn’t make sense since nothing was going that way before hand? It’s confusing. I need money, oh but instead I can just get that guy to do that random job from 25 chapters ago instead. Oh. On second thought I didn’t want to seem suspicious but I’ll do it anyways. (That really happens).Everyone is always yelling lol. It kinda drives me crazy. Personal grudge.The time he spends in the “game” is ridiculous to say the least. (Not dogging it) more than I can count the perspective will change and they’ll back track a lot of the story from that other perspective. Or from multiple.there’s really no chapter development even now except for the MC.