- #1
Well, it's exciting and boring.There are quite a few chapters where you get nothing from the MC in the later parts, just a lot of setup for later events. Granted, the setup is welcome, but the execution of the setup is a bit too long most of the time making it feel like you're reading a completely unrelated story at times.The actual plot hook is kinda 'Meh' but the execution of the plot is done fairly well, not great but fairly well done.The characters are a bit flat, dialogue is okay, and world-building is similarly average.What makes this story readable are the interactions and serious moments. Those really suck you in and keep you wondering how things are going to turn out, everything else gets a bit tedious at times (and coming from a person who enjoys Slice-of-Life stories very much that's saying something).Overall, enjoyable, but could use a good editor to cut down on some sections and poke the author to write more about some of the more relevant things.