Crossing to the Wild Chapter -- Discussion

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I got so confused reading this.

Because so many elements were poured into one story that didnot have the best condition and setting for them to bloom.

It's prehistoric or cave men age but not really that. It's some sort of fantasy cultivation setting but not really. It's building the tribe and the world but not really.

The development of the characters (not only the MC and ML) were confusing too.

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