- #1
Of the 42 chapters I read so far, only like 2 chapters were interesting, and they were the first couple of chapters.I find this to be really uninteresting. It's not even as close to being as entertaining as Eminence of the Shadows. MC here just steam rolls his way with convenient powers. Eminence of the Shadows does the same, but he does it with style. This one doesn't. There's no reaction, no mystique, no buildup; it doesn't even paint him as a gang or mafia-like organization.Spoiler
He shoots lasers out of his fingers that instakills and once he demolishes a criminal organization, he uses a contract (basically s*ave magic) to incorporate them into his.
So, rather than building his organization, he steals others and claim it as his own. Typically, they would be disloyal, but MC has a convenient power that makes them loyal.
[collapse]Idk, maybe it does later, but I just can't find myself trying to continue. There's just no hook and I don't want to look for it. Honestly, I think this would've better if we started off with him being the leader already as it was in chapter 1 rather than him starting from "scratch".