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Like when Louis sprained his ankle. Luckily, it was just a bruise. Or when Gyuseong lost his voice due to illness. Luckily, his voice returned by the time of the concert, so he could still perform. Or when they had a scandal. Its truth was then explained within just two chapters onward. The problems come and then they're gone. Cough, it's not very realistic because, in the real world, these problems would drag on and on, cough. I'm not saying I don't like a novel with no drama. Sometimes, angst can become tiring real fast, and I just want to read a story where the MC and his friends are happy. But that doesn't mean the problems should be resolved in the blink of an eye, either. Here's an example. When Louis sprain his ankle? Well, imagine if the injury was more serious. So MOST tried to create a new dance choreography and modified the song a bit to match Louis' condition at the time. It would be a bit more dramatic, you know. Even though it's a slice-of-life novel, if there was no tension, the reader could get bored pretty quickly ðŸ«
[collapse]And some of the songs MOST made didn't get the attention they deserved. I mean, when they first made their debut, they made an album, not just singles. So there must be a lot of songs inside, right? The problem is that only one song among the others got the spotlight. The rest were just mentioned by title alone. No lyric. No concept. Sure, 2 or 3 songs from that album were explained, but that was after 100 or so chapters. While they made their first album at chapters 20–30 or so. It was already too late. And again! The explanation was very brief. We don't know how the dance choreography was, the lyrics were only sung halfway. So it was clear that those songs weren't that important. They were just here so the author can write a sentence of 'MOST released an album, not singles like any other rookie idols' in their novel. And I felt like... that was such a missed opportunity.I don't really like the Debut or Die novel after the story became monotonous and repetitive, but I admit, the songs they made left an impression on the readers. Heck, I still remembered some of them until now, and I read that novel a while ago.It's not like MOST's songs didn't leave any impression in my mind at all (cough KAIROS' songs from 'Grab the Regressor by the Collar' novel were even more forgettable than MOST's songs cough) but I'm a little disappointed that the songs in that album didn't get their deserved spotlight. Even though it's your very first album :/As we approached the ending, the pacing of the story was starting to get a lil bit faster as well. Even though they just finished holding a concert for the awards party, two chapters later, they hold another awards concert? Or that time where Dojae was just finished shooting a movie, and in the same chapter, the movie was then released? No breather whatsoever? A prelude trailer to that movie or something? Maybe, according to the author, if the flow of the story gets interrupted by unimportant 'cutscenes', the story will become unnecessarily long. It's a slice-of-life novel, after all. Sometimes, it's hard to manage the pacing of the story. But...I'm still wondering why the story telling went doubled in speed like that 😅So, will I recommend this novel? If you like reading a pure slice-of-life novel about idols and not just a cover story for the author to hide the 'drama' inside like the previous 3 novels I've mentioned? Sure. It's a peaceful novel that you can read if you wanna relax your brain, and that's okay. 7.8/10. I couldn't give it an 8 because their problems were resolved way too quickly, making it seem trivial. And the pacing of the story was a bit too fast in the last couple of chapters.