Helmut: The Forsaken Child Chapter 254 part2 Discussion

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It's very much been an enjoyable read, but one problems persists. And that's narrative idiocy. A character who is rational makes an idiotic decision because the author determines so. They'll try to have the character make an excuse for the idiocy, but the excuse just doesn't hold water.

So, enjoy your reading, but expect random moments of narrative idiocy that will make you sigh.
 
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