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I really like the plot, the characters and even most of the writing and I really want to finish it.Unfortunately, literally 60% of this novel consists of detailed scenes of MC eating and I'm bored of it. Like it'll literally be:- MC wakes up and demands food, detailed description of breakfast follows.- MC then logs into VR game and immediately goes to a food street / restaurant to eat, detailed description of meal to follow.- MC logs out and needs to go somewhere, so in the 10min car drive, he needs snacks, detailed description of snacks.- MC gets back home after tiring days, yup you guessed it, better have a detailed description of his supper.And in between this, some plot is happening.I just wish there was less... eating. This novel feels like reading a mukbang.
