- #1
The story sounded promising and I would actually love to keep reading it but the new translation just isn’t as good.This is my personal opinion, but I find that the tone of voice just doesn’t flow as well. It may not be an issue for others but it is a issue for me. I’m not sure if it is the machine translation that is making it sound disconnected. I have read a few translation from KnoxT and it seems that this translator work is not my cup of tea.Spoiler
Example below
“Even you are planning to persuade me to give up?” Said by the ML
To me this doesn’t sound like something he would have phrased in this way.
Grammatically it should be “Are you also planning to persuade me to give up?"
This might be a translation phrasing issue but it does not sound like the Ml.
He sounds more like ”Who are you to tell me to give in?”
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