Living As the Villainess Queen Chapter 99 Discussion

Does giving a 2 star feel a bit harsh? No. It is exactly that.

I wouldn't say this is bad writing but it felt plain like your normal, average ikea hotdog instead of nice proper restaurant food. There is not one interesting character, they are soulless and dull.

-Even though I couldn't feel anything for the characters I was reading for the plot and after chapter 93, I thought this felt like chapter 20 AT MOST in the case of story development. Well, there are monster attacks and such but they feel completely detached from the main characters' relationship. ML goes kills them and then comes back. That's it. Nothing interesting happens.

-MC is too damn slow. The author uses this slowness to create unnecessary drama. I wish at least ML had a character but he is only described as a protective powerful king.

-The romance is unexisting, still in chapter 99, the couple only had s*x, talked like 3 times, doesn't know each other properly, and can't have absolute trust. They are "flirting" a little and that's it. I wouldn't call that love, it's more like s*xual hunger.

I generally write commentary chapter by chapter but for this novel, I couldn't comment much and in the end, the comments turned into complaints:

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#3-Wait, how can she openly ask who's Marrianne?

#14-Hell yeah, you should always go with memory loss excuse in an isekai situation.

#23-So the Praz thingy fell in love with her soul first ay?

#24-A-oh she has woken up the beast.

#29-Give her a break...

#48-It's bothering me that he only visits her at night to do you know what.

#52-Abu is the best character. Period.

#60-I mean... girl you can help him...

#63-Don't write unnecessary flattery my boy. It'll get them suspicious.

#66-Wait how can she tell him that she kinda remembers her relationship with the princess. That doesn't make sense author! She suppose to be forgotten even her powers and you aren't gonna make Kasser question this? Bullsh*t.

#72-Verus my boy, yes the queen is the one who should defeat the larks.

#86-She needs to open the old memories topic to Kasser. She's being a dumbass. Nobody is gonna blame her for Jin's doings, they see her as a different person already. It wouldn't be a nice choice of author if Eugene stays hiding Jin's memories.

#87-You're already making a mistake by not telling him Eugene.

#91-Nothing's happening in this story...I'm planning to drop it.

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Why drop it after chapter 99? :

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When she lied AGAIN and said "None of my memories has returned." I snapped. Like I said in chapter 86 commentary: She needs to open the old memories topic to Kasser. Nobody is gonna blame her for Jin's doings since they already see Eugene and Jin as different characters. The author only uses this to make uncreative drama later on. It's already chapter 99 for fuc sake, at this point the couple must trust each other to death. Even tho the new story arc opened with Rodrigo it'd be a pain to read this further.

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It might feel like a decent story because of its writing style and translation but it's exactly 2 because there are definitely worse ones.