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There is a clear explanation early on about why the FL doesn't know things even though it's "her book." Her book was set a few years later, in a different part of the world, and was more focused on different characters. What makes it an issue is the annoying and repetitive way the FL thinks! She realizes this herself, but then keeps acting surprised and confused about really trivial things.
My favorite example of this so far is about "the beasts." She knows that they are able to shape-shift. She wrote about it in her book. But she gets quite distressed when she sees the ML's beast shape-shift from a horse into a panther and realizes it's the one she wrote about. Because she wrote that the beast was a panther and (gasp dun dun dun) it's different. Darlin', that is a panther. That's how come you just recognized it. It shape-shifts into a panther most of the time he's "using" it. Which is the only time it showed up in the book. That's NOT DIFFERENT from the book! It's THE SAME. I do not see the issue here. 💀
[collapse]I'd say give it a try and see how it takes you, because I don't think it's bad, I think it just doesn't appeal to me personally.BTW, repeat after me. Having "a setting" is not the same as having "world-building." A setting is a basic, world-building is advanced. You probably mean "the setting" not "the world-building."