Husband, Spend Some Gold Coins Chapter -- Discussion

I'm not sure if it's because of the original text or the translation (most likely both, maybe with more emphasis on the original work), but it feels like a high schooler's essay. One who's not particularily talented in writing. It somehow manages to be boring even when the subject is (or at least should be) quite interesting/tense. I couldn't read for more than a handful of chapters, so it's possible that it gets better later on, I just don't want to stick around to find out.